hmm.
Ok, I dont mind reviewing works that are "out there", but when someone says "this game is about the message" Then there better damn well be a
message. And it better be somthing that we dont already know.
giving people a message that you can win or lose is like saying theres day or night. dont try to do the obvious things, try teaching us somthing.
now, as for the game itself. i break the 10 points up into sub catagories- originality, sound, gameplay, storyline and graphics. tahts a total of 2 points per item.
Originality- 1 Platformers have been and gone, they need to be really good
to stand out.
Sound- 0 simply was none, so you scored zero
storyline- 0 again there was no storyline, just a message noone seems to
be able to figure out.
gameplay- 1 the gameplay itself was simple to control, however a lack of
depth of gameplay meant that you scored low .
graphics- 1 the graphics are too simplistic. walking around with a black
square is not eye catching nor entertaining. the level itself and
the doorway scored you one point.
so, all in all, a fairly poor effort. I think you can do a lot better, and dont let these bad reviews put you off- learn from your mistakes, and come back with a new, fresh game- I will be waiting.